Date: Sunday, 27 August 2006 07:29 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leon-orr.livejournal.com
Логически правильнее ваш вариант, но ритмически - мой.
В вашем на один слог меньше, ткань стиха ломается.
Но - спасибо.
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